00:00
00:00
AniTOnGer

21 Movie Reviews

11 w/ Responses

Well besides the fact that I dont realy get the plot, I like the animationstyle :D
The lipsync could use some work though, there are a lot of very good tutorials on youtube on that topic, just look it up :)
the beating chest in the end could have been better.
But over all it was a solid piece of animation and I feel like there is a lot of potential in the style :)

3.5/5

Cheers,

Nick

I like the fluent style of your Animation and I think its pretty funny, buuuut to give you some critique.... even though it was hard to find something, I think the last camerapan was a little unneeded, you could have made a whole bodyshot then it wouldn't be so shaky (maybe the wrong word here but the shot before was slowly zooming in and then there is this quick cut and a quick pan up, that feels a little rough to watch, maybe you could have made a static shot just on the upper body..^^)
Buuut after all, very solid animation style, good lipsync and nice gigglemoment, cant stop watching it :D
4.5/5 :)
looking foreward to your next piece, you good sir are getting a follower !

ShadeMachine responds:

Even i was not satisfied with the camera effects... It does feel... not smooth/sudden movements..!! Thank you for the cool tips...!!! :)

Even though I didnt realy get the plot, and there is a small cut in the sound, this is a true masterpiece of art, I admire the style and cant imagine how long this took :o

Hereder responds:

Thanks allot!
The cut in the song is simply because the song was too long and left me with 3 options:
1. Go back to the drawing board and make more images.
2. re-use the existing images to draaaag it out.
3. cut the song in the middle. (still not good, I know, but I lack a proper software for it)

Thanks anyway!

I love this piece *.*
Great animation, good lipsync, great characters, great environment design in terms of sounds and are, good shading , I realy like it a lot :)
For a 5/5 the lipsync should be a little faster, but no offense at all, I realy like it !

Cheers,

Nick

I realy admire the characterdesign but the animation is a little slow and sticky, still good work though, keep it up !
Cheers,

Nick

Pakushy responds:

"demo" implies its not finished. im adding alot of frames, voices and background on the final version. be happy i didnt charge you 20$ for early access :D

Love it !
<3

Wondermeow responds:

Thanks dude ^^

Kind regards,

Wondermeow

Great Job dude !:)
The characters and the sfx are very refined !:)
The only thing that keeps me from giving you a 5/5 is the music :(
In my opinion the music you chose wasn't good for the mood in the video :/ maybe take another one that comes along with whats actually happemimg im the video for your next episode :)
Other then that, I realy like it and Im looking foreward to the next episode :)

Cheers,

Nick

poppetje3D responds:

Glad your liking it, everyone has his taste in music.

Your work is gettin better so fast, I am kinda jeallous bout it, I just cant bring my ideas as fast to the web as you can, keep it up :)
BTW would you like to do a collab sometime in the future ? :3

Nick

Wondermeow responds:

Thanks for the kind words thats really nice of you, of course mate ^^.

Kind regards,

Wondermeow

Even thoughthe voices aren't the best the joke comes over quite nice ^^
I like it! Pls make some longer cartoons though :(

Wondermeow responds:

Hi AniTONGer,

Thanks mate appreciate the feedback, I definitely keep note to make longer cartoons ^^.

Kind regards,

Wondermeow

I love the artwork and your style of painting and i guess the joke is brought over quite well ^^ maybe you should work on the voice a little more :/ cant understand at all what bane is saying in the first part :(
great work tho ! keep it up !

I try to animate some stuff .... oh if you read this you won a dishwasher :*

Age 27, Male

Germany

Joined on 3/7/13

Level:
5
Exp Points:
190 / 280
Exp Rank:
> 100,000
Vote Power:
4.14 votes
Rank:
Civilian
Global Rank:
> 100,000
Blams:
1
Saves:
8
B/P Bonus:
0%
Whistle:
Normal
Medals:
34