Well besides the fact that I dont realy get the plot, I like the animationstyle :D
The lipsync could use some work though, there are a lot of very good tutorials on youtube on that topic, just look it up :)
the beating chest in the end could have been better.
But over all it was a solid piece of animation and I feel like there is a lot of potential in the style :)

3.5/5

Cheers,

Nick

I like the fluent style of your Animation and I think its pretty funny, buuuut to give you some critique.... even though it was hard to find something, I think the last camerapan was a little unneeded, you could have made a whole bodyshot then it wouldn't be so shaky (maybe the wrong word here but the shot before was slowly zooming in and then there is this quick cut and a quick pan up, that feels a little rough to watch, maybe you could have made a static shot just on the upper body..^^)
Buuut after all, very solid animation style, good lipsync and nice gigglemoment, cant stop watching it :D
4.5/5 :)
looking foreward to your next piece, you good sir are getting a follower !

Even though I didnt realy get the plot, and there is a small cut in the sound, this is a true masterpiece of art, I admire the style and cant imagine how long this took :o

HAHAHAHAHA :D Hilarious, who came up with that Idea ? XD

Cheers,

Nick

Love iT !